Well I'm impressed. You wrote a heck of lot of story in two sentences.

When you go to Clarion, will they critique your printed work?

Thanks, Rachel!

I think at Clarion we crit the submission pieces, plus what we write while we're there. I don't think we crit what people have already published. But no one's actually told me yet...

I posted a comment over on Nanoism, but I'll also say here:
OOOoooooOOOOOOo
I like!

Thanks, Tiffany. I'm flattered.

And I apologize for misspelling your name. Tiffani.

Very intriguing. Is this a hint of a larger story you're writing?

Hi, Annette! Thanks.

Nope. I just wanted to try a twitterfic that was a single character voice, rather than a narrative -- and I wanted a hint that the speaker was not everything he claimed to be.